
loves the rumble that makes buildings tremble. bring on the spikey haired youth of lightning, but I wait for the powerhouse of black suited slick criminals that have voices like wrecking balls - nothing makes me feel more human and part of this world than the deep honest blues song of a soul that is a thunderstorm.

I love this! I want you to elaborate more on the youth of lightning...show the reader, don't tell. Try to paint a picture with words. Good job!
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